This is one of the pieces of writing that was published in Silhouettes
. The certain example here takes place during winter.
Getting out of bed is Hell every morning.
For critique, I'm looking to see how I can improve my future memoirs, because I don't have a lot of experience writing them. What sort of tone do you detect, and does it appeal to you as a reader? Does it match the subject? Also, is this piece interesting enough that you would want to keep reading? Does it get boring?
I guess any sort of critique is helpful, really. c: Thanks!
I critiqued dressed to the nines.