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Elodie by crisisastar15

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All right.
I suppose we'll start with the good aspects. The shading and background are both lovely. You really have a thing for colors, don't you? c:
However, you might have to work on anatomy -- especially snouts. To be honest, I can't tell if Elodie is a canine or a cat. If she is a wolf, her snout should be longer, right? It looks very short. Now, I understand it's hard to show a long snout from different perspectives (believe me, I'm still focusing on that with my art), but you might want to look into finding a tutorial or something. Schnozzes are hard.

I'm really not sure what else to say, because this looks great, apart from the facial anatomy. Nice work!
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crisisastar15 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :love: this really helped :thanks: . And lol XD yeah. Snouts and muzzles are extremely difficult for C: . She's suppose to be feline.
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Erudi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A feline? I was almost certain she was a wolf, actually...
Probably because of the anatomy overall. It's very dog-like. Cats have a far more different type of anatomy -- especially in their shoulders and back thighs.
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crisisastar15 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEah I know. I find cat anatomy (Feline in general) very difficult from canine anatomy. ^^; It's always one of the thing I seem to never get drown correctly :). But I thank you very much for the critique and I'll take in this lovely advice~ :love:
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Erudi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, it's very difficult -- especially for those who don't have pet cats. e-o
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crisisastar15 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a cat XD But I haven't studied him as long as I studied my dog and I've been recently practicing felines :) (snots for that matter)
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Erudi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh, that's good. ^^
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