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Haiku 2012

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Erudi
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breeze embraces me,
Summer sky sails overhead,
pedaling faster--
I revisited an old haiku from about two years ago, and I ended up with this. c:
© 2013 - 2024 Erudi
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DragonTygress

Oh my goodness, I've missed your poetry ;u;

This is a lovely haiku. Its subject is portrayed perfectly, I think.

(though for some dumb reason I dislike the title; it feels like a spoiler to how the poem ends! Even though it's a teeny poem and there isn't much to spoil. I dunno.)